Wednesday, November 18, 2015

Sunshade

Done for Carpe Diem #19 as is above; as below


sunshade
over our vanities--
nightfall

© Adjei Agyei-Baah, November 18, 2015.

Inspired by the haiku below:

rain
the horse's head bowed
straight down
© Jane Reichhold

snow on snow
this night in December
a full moon
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)

steel blue night
the old pond ripples in the breeze
mirrored full moon
© Ch√®vrefeuille

16 comments:

  1. The juxtaposition of Line One and Line Three is remarkable

    Much love...

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  2. Thanks so much Gillena dear. Hope your afternoon has been great

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    1. Good to hear that Pirate. but please teach me how to comment on your blog

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    1. Thanks Humbird....your comment means a lot here

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    1. Thanks Lynn. Your comment is a pot of gold here

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    1. Thanks Carol. I am humbled. I keep learning haiku everyday

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  7. Splendid ... truly splendid! Bastet

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    1. Thanks Bastet. I feel catapaulted into the sky. Will continue to read and share great haiku

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  8. Thanks Dove for your kind words. I will be fuelled by them

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