Wednesday, November 18, 2015

Sunshade

Done for Carpe Diem #19 as is above; as below


sunshade
over our vanities--
nightfall

© Adjei Agyei-Baah, November 18, 2015.

Inspired by the haiku below:

rain
the horse's head bowed
straight down
© Jane Reichhold

snow on snow
this night in December
a full moon
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)

steel blue night
the old pond ripples in the breeze
mirrored full moon
© Chèvrefeuille
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14 comments:

  1. Gillena CoxNovember 18, 2015 at 4:30 AM

    The juxtaposition of Line One and Line Three is remarkable

    Much love...

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  2. adjei agyei-baahNovember 18, 2015 at 4:34 AM

    Thanks so much Gillena dear. Hope your afternoon has been great

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  3. Reading PleasureNovember 18, 2015 at 9:16 AM

    A masterpiece!

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  4. UnknownNovember 18, 2015 at 12:09 PM

    That one really gives a smile.

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    1. adjei agyei-baahNovember 19, 2015 at 1:39 AM

      Good to hear that Pirate. but please teach me how to comment on your blog

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  5. humbirdNovember 18, 2015 at 1:00 PM

    Moving words, lines, haiku!

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  6. Carol CampbellNovember 19, 2015 at 6:03 AM

    So very good!

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    1. adjei agyei-baahNovember 20, 2015 at 4:19 AM

      Thanks Carol. I am humbled. I keep learning haiku everyday

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  7. Bastet's Waka LibraryNovember 19, 2015 at 11:19 PM

    Splendid ... truly splendid! Bastet

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    1. adjei agyei-baahNovember 20, 2015 at 4:21 AM

      Thanks Bastet. I feel catapaulted into the sky. Will continue to read and share great haiku

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  8. adjei agyei-baahNovember 20, 2015 at 4:18 AM

    Thanks Lynn. Your comment is a pot of gold here

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  9. adjei agyei-baahNovember 20, 2015 at 7:12 AM

    Thanks Dove for your kind words. I will be fuelled by them

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