Done for Carpe Diem Special #193 Revise That Haiku ... a trip along memory lane
On this episode, we were challenge to revise or re-write a piece of Shiki (1867-1902) , one of the five masters of the haiku art:
Stone Buddha
Stone Buddha
his
shoulder pad of snow
lightening
in sunrise
(c) Adjei Agyei-Baah, Jan 22, 2016
Inspired by:
the snow has melted
on one shoulder
on one shoulder
of the Great Buddha
(c) Shiki (1867-1902)
Beautifully done,my brother.
ReplyDeleteThanks dear, working on your stuff and will be hearing good news soon.
Deletelovely, his shoulders do look like huge shoulder pad ;)
ReplyDeleteYeah Tournesol, that portion of the image jumped at me. Glad that you observed it too
DeleteNicely done .. very nicely done indeed.
ReplyDeleteThanks Georgia, you guys are the inspiration. You always string me along
DeleteWell done! Love your rewrite
ReplyDeleteThanks Dolores...your words mean a lot here
DeleteA beautiful revision Adjei ...
ReplyDeleteThanks Krist, you've been doing a marvelous job
DeleteIt's awesome. Shiki would be proud.
ReplyDeleteHahaha...yeah Feni...perhaps he is smiling in his grave
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