Glad you liked it Janice...i think its my toughest haiku technique attempted so far
Wonderful 'undou' haiku Adjei ... real movement of lives young and old ... chapeau!
These Haiku techniques are worthy of learning. I have never thought them existing when I was caught in this art. Thanks so much for the exposure Krist, for now I can decipher employed in each haiku that I write
Such a clever haiku
Thanks very much Forest Pirate. Your comment comes as a spur