Saturday, December 26, 2015

Sing Back

Done for Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #24 movement (undou)




singing back her lullabies - old age


(C) Adjei Agyei-Baah, December 26, 2015


Inspired by:


like wheel

always turning around
seasons come and go

© Chèvrefeuille

6 comments:

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    1. Glad you liked it Janice...i think its my toughest haiku technique attempted so far

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  2. Wonderful 'undou' haiku Adjei ... real movement of lives young and old ... chapeau!

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    1. These Haiku techniques are worthy of learning. I have never thought them existing when I was caught in this art. Thanks so much for the exposure Krist, for now I can decipher employed in each haiku that I write

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    1. Thanks very much Forest Pirate. Your comment comes as a spur

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