Done for Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #25 The Technique of Narrowing Focus
twilight sky
watching
migratory birds
vanishing into
dots
© Adjei
Agyei-Baah, January 1, 2016.
inspired:
the whole sky
in a wide field of flowers
one tulip
(c) Jane Reichhold
the short night ending--
close to the water's edge
a jellyfish
(c) Yosa Buson
in a wide field of flowers
one tulip
(c) Jane Reichhold
close to the water's edge
a jellyfish
(c) Yosa Buson
Awesome haiku Adjei ... fine way to use narrowing focus.
ReplyDeleteYou are always the inspiration...I really love this technique. Please lets keep on exploring everything Krist. You are doing a marvelous for us who cannot afford a full class on haiku. Wishing you a happy new year
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