Friday, January 1, 2016

Twilight Sky

Done for Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #25 The Technique of Narrowing Focus


twilight sky
watching migratory birds
vanishing into dots

© Adjei Agyei-Baah, January 1, 2016.


inspired:

the whole sky
in a wide field of flowers
one tulip

(c) Jane Reichhold

the short night ending--
close to the water's edge
a jellyfish


(c) Yosa Buson

2 comments:

  1. Awesome haiku Adjei ... fine way to use narrowing focus.

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  2. You are always the inspiration...I really love this technique. Please lets keep on exploring everything Krist. You are doing a marvelous for us who cannot afford a full class on haiku. Wishing you a happy new year

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